Hello there! This submission was fun to work on. It's been a long time since I last drew muscles on top of a Loomis construction. I only corrected a few things, mainly around the upper torso and the angle of the arms. Remember that when we raise our arms, the width of the chest decreases because the pectoral muscles stretch from the sides as they connect to the humerus. Because of this, you'll notice that I reduced the width of the pectorals. On top of that, you've drawn both arms as if they were pointing in the same direction from a side view. A more natural and believable solution would be for the character's right arm to face the camera a bit more, while the left arm points slightly outward. As for the left arm, we shouldn't be able to see the entire deltoid. Drawing it that way makes the arm appear longer than it should and causes it to feel disconnected from the body. Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback