Hi! This is shaping up to be a really cool self portrait! I think the right side of the face needs to be brought up ever so slightly (blue) and try to draw that second eye a little bit more as though it is curving around the volume of the face rather than drawing it head-on. Other minor things I added were connecting the knuckles a little bit more (green) and making the pen a little bit broader (purple) to follow the perpective. Hope it helps and keep up the good work!! c: | Artwod Feedback