Hey there! This is already a solid foundation! :D The main thing I notice is that everything is lit almost equally, so there isn't much of a value hierarchy. I'd start by darkening the surrounding areas of the scene. That will naturally draw the viewer's attention toward the character and create a stronger contrast between the grouped values around the edges of the composition and those around the focal point. I'm assuming the main light source is coming from above, so I'd keep that lighting direction consistent and only illuminate the planes that are actually facing the light, such as the top of the cap and the upper surfaces of the refrigerator. Right now, some front-facing planes are brightly lit while other upward-facing planes remain dark, which makes the lighting feel a bit inconsistent. Hope this helps! :) | Artwod Feedback