Hi! Looking good!I think that you're going towards the right direction with this one! :)) The things that stood out to me the most was the values, the perspective and a little bit of the composition. - The thing about the perspective that stood out to me was that the orcs closest to the camera looked kind of small compared to the one to the back so i made them bigger in my overpaint to make the feel roughly the same. - The values felt like they were working abit against the Mr.Eagle since that's where I assume the focal point should be. So the Orcs in the back got abit darker/ blending with the background to make the Mr.Eagle pop out more since it's in a spotligt. And the orcs closest to the camera got abit darker to make them stand out from the other orcs (they could go even darker) - And for the composition a changed the middle orc in the back so it's closer and abit behind the other one so it overlaps to make it feel abit crammed for the orcs. Orc to the left was also rotated abit so it overlaps the other one and the left one closest to the camera was rotated abit so that it looks like he is looking at Mr.Eagle. And since everyone is looking at Mr.Eagle it kind of leads the eye back automaticly to him which is nice for the compositions flow. + Made the camera zoom out abit more just to make Mr.Eagle feel even smaller Hope this helps! :) | Artwod Feedback