Hi! I softened the contrast a little bit as I think it was a bit too stark. Since there is a direct lightsource on the bright sand, I also felt like this landscape was the perfect setup for some slightly brighter bouncelights against the rockface. Other than that, try to keep the silhouette of the rocks really clear and sharp. I know you initially had a day-time scene, but the shadows looked more liike an evening setup so I changed the colour of the sky a little bit. If you do want it to remain a daytime scene, I recommend adding in a lot of "sky" light, reflected from the atmosphere onto the top of the rocks. Hope it helps! c: | Artwod Feedback