Hello there! I like the way you used the reference; however, personally, I’d like your character to follow the same gesture as the reference pose, in other words, to emphasize the body tilt more and make it feel like they’re really leaning against the wall. I think that would give the character more personality. As for the head, what I did was tilt it a bit more and also overlap it with the phone. This would help keep the head from looking flat, in addition to drawing it more in a 3/4 view rather than straight-on. Also, notice that the phone isn’t completely flat. I drew the speaker ellipses to give it more volume :) Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback