I'm trying to get more into character design and the new spooky November Artwod challenge seemed like a good opportunity to level up. So here's my first draft. I'm not necessarily looking for feedback on the drawing itself. I need feedback specifically on the design, shape language, communication of the character design itself and readability. What do you like? What don't you like? What would you change? Thank you!

I'm trying to get more into character design and the new spooky November Artwod challenge seemed like a good opportunity to level up. So here's my first draft. I'm not necessarily looking for feedback on the drawing itself. I need feedback specifically on the design, shape language, communication of the character design itself and readability. What do you like? What don't you like? What would you change? Thank you! | Artwod Feedback