Not entirely finished, but how readable do you think this linework is? If you had to change lineweight or form lines, what would it be? I'm also wondering if the skull could use thicker lines since the head is usually a central element. I'm also pretty sure the items are somehow in a wrong perspective (just a hunch). In addition to that i don't have much experience with cloth/cloaks, so if you have any pointers in how to make them more visually interesting/believable i'm all ears. | Artwod Feedback