For this artwork I was mainly focusing on rendering. So, my first issue is I'm not quite good at light scatter on the skin which I would like a feedback on how to do. I was studying Marc Brunet's render style so if you'd like to give me an advice on how to do his style more accurately. Also, I have a recurring feedback where I make only soft to lost edges so I mainly focused on hard edges here. Finally, I would like to know where in this art does your eyes draw to. Thank you in advance.