Hiya! Sorry for the wait c: For the figure, I think the centre line of their face is probably pushed a bit more further towards the creature and I also shortened the head as it felt a little bit too elongated. For the tongue, try to show that it is indeed wrapped around the arm by showing overlap like this! Hope it helps c:

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I've been trying to get the underlying forms right for this cover illustration I've been working on. The monster should be swallowing the elf's arm, with its tongue wrapped around it and pulling him into his mouth. The elf should be falling back from the slurk's attack, but getting a nice stab in as he falls backwards.

If anyone has any suggestions for fitting these shapes together, getting the movement right, etc., I'd be grateful! Thanks!

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Here's where I'm at with the cover for our adventure now...

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Hiya! Sorry for the wait c: For the figure, I think the centre line of their face is probably pushed a bit more further towards the creature and I also shortened the head as it felt a little bit too elongated. For the tongue, try to show that it is indeed wrapped around the arm by showing overlap like this! Hope it helps c:

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