Hi, sorry for the delay! I think this work is already pretty solid execution-wise, so I definitely don't have any hard points to critique here. Things I would improve are making sure parts feel like they are influencing each other, (like the blue arrows, adding in cast shadows/form shadows of the clothes onto the body) and are clearly readable as being seperate elements as well (green arrow, adding ambient occlusion around the belt to make it feel less flat). Other than that I would add a little bit more variation in your silhouet (pink lines) even though it is very subtle, it adds a lot of believability to the materials and their volume. And lastly with the third pose: I think it would be really functional to have a pose in this outfit+prop to see how she would actually carry this gun. It looks like it could easily go up to being 15-20kgs and she is also leaning towards it, making it feel a little bit unstable. So I would maybe leave out the gun in this pose so you can still show the outfit clearly, and then have a seperate piece showing how she would actually carry it the prop, showing how she would adjust her body to counteract the weight would show off the prop in a more functional way. I hope this is helpful and keep up the great work! c: | Artwod Feedback