Hello, sorry for the delay!! This is such a lovely portrait, I think your overall technique is pretty great and you succeed in showing the different forms of the face, the only thing i have changed is to keep the dark values of the face consistent throughout the portrait and I slightly moved the eyes to be more positioned according to the nose and mouth. (Digitally this is an easy thing to fix, traditionally with pen and paper not so much c:) Great job! | Artwod Feedback