Ah! Another brilliant portrait! Of course, I don't have the reference image of what this person looks like, so don't take any likeness cues from me, but for this one I would mainly advise to build up the graphite slowly on the side of the face where the light hits and letting the white of your paper work *for* you! On the other hand I added a bit more depth in the darker tones aswell. Hope it helps and keep up the good work! c: | Artwod Feedback