Hi there, sorry it's taken us a while! I actually think this is brilliant, I love the way you have drawn the facial features in this piece and think the piece as a whole is really cool as is. However, I added some shading on the hair on the forehead, amped up those gorgeous shapes and colours in the hair, and I redrew the torso a little bit to have more realistic proportions (but as this is a stylised piece, you weren't wrong before so feel free to ignore that part). Keep up the great work! c: | Artwod Feedback