Hi there, sorry for the delay! I love the shape you drew for the eyes and how expressive this is!! I think you could improve the shading by following the round form of the hair and face more like I did here instead of using a straight line (because then it will read flatter). For composition I would put the hand pointing towards the light source and the sparkles that fly off of it could also all lean towards it. Lastly I fixed the hand a little bit as well since the thumb should be on the other side in this pose c: Hope it helps and keep it up!! | Artwod Feedback