Hiya, sorry for the wait! I think this is a really cool sketch just the way it was! The only things I added are lines to seperate the figures from each other a little more, as I wasn't too sure sometimes which figure was which. I think adding varying grey tones would also help with the readability. Other than that I gave a bit more structure to the legs of the figure in the front and made the hands of the person on the right a bit smaller. Hope it helps and keep up the great work! c: | Artwod Feedback