Hi there, sorry for the delay! I softened the folds in the clothing a little bit as I thought they were perhaps a tad too dark and I added a bit more cohesion in value per layer to help seperate them and know what's in front of the other. However, I wouldn't follow that last piece of advice I gave there (with the paint over values) as I think you have a really cool and original style that is also meant to be a bit chaotic, busy, psychedelic,... and I genuinly just love this as a page so I would just leave this as is! c: | Artwod Feedback