Im very amateur and have been struggling with having like a good stylized coloring style for my oc which i made, i would appreciate all the help and critics to improve, i do need a lot of practice yes but if i were told exactly where and how i can improve ill be very thankful, also in particular i need help selecting colors for the lights and the darks

Im very amateur and have been struggling with having like a good stylized coloring style for my oc which i made, i would appreciate all the help and critics to improve, i do need a lot of practice yes but if i were told exactly where and how i can improve ill be very thankful, also in particular i need help selecting colors for the lights and the darks | Artwod Feedback