Would appreciate feedback on composition, obviously trying to stylize with negative space, but I would like to know whether certain spaces are too visually heavy/distracting and how I could maintain a bold approach to the negative space while not compromising compositional integrity.

Would appreciate feedback on composition, obviously trying to stylize with negative space, but I would like to know whether certain spaces are too visually heavy/distracting and how I could maintain a bold approach to the negative space while not compromising compositional integrity. | Artwod Feedback