Did a quick Nami drawing with Zeus and the lightning looks like scribbles rn. The power effect is the main problem but her character pose also feels a bit off. Would love some anime feedback on making the effect cleaner. trying to learn rendering and effects, share my art progress and keep doing these drawings as workouts

Did a quick Nami drawing with Zeus and the lightning looks like scribbles rn. The power effect is the main problem but her character pose also feels a bit off. Would love some anime feedback on making the effect cleaner. trying to learn rendering and effects, share my art progress and keep doing these drawings as workouts | Artwod Feedback