One of my biggest goals is to become a better character designer, and I recently decided to tackle a few book characters to see what I could create. I would just like to have any general advice that could help improve these designs, because sometimes I feel like other people see things that I can't.

One of my biggest goals is to become a better character designer, and I recently decided to tackle a few book characters to see what I could create. I would just like to have any general advice that could help improve these designs, because sometimes I feel like other people see things that I can't. | Artwod Feedback