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Tomomi Shimizu - Redesign

I am struggling so hard with this lad's design... he's a little crab themed, but I don't want to lean into that too much since it would be hard to mesh with his main theme, candy. I'd like for the oranges, pink-ish red, and purple to stay, but feel free to change up literally everything as long as he looks either cute or hot. Or both. His current deal is that he lived in an under-water isolationist society that's kind of japan inspired (though not very) which often uses a candy called 'karmel" as fuel for their magic. Tomomi here has the special power to conjure up karmel on a whim, so he's a sweet boy in a literal sense. He was basically kidnapped and tossed into a colosseum meat-grinder for farming EXP, hence the many scars... despite this he's usually a friendly face, being the chiller half of his comedy duo I can't elaborate on lest I make this explanation too long. He's insane, but he's insane in a fun way, y'know? Ignore the masochism. So, as you folks can tell, this whole backstory is REALLY hard to implement in tandem with his themes! I'm struggling!! I'm dying in here!!! Save me, more experienced artists!!!!

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