Hello there! I really like the illustration! :) One thing I would recommend is experimenting with painting your shadows using more graphic shapes, while also introducing a bit of a transition between the light and shadow areas and keeping some of the linework intact. You could also try drawing with a red or orange line set to Multiply. That way, the line blends naturally with the colors underneath and creates a really interesting effect. Something I didn't do in my paintover, but thought of while writing this feedback, is adding a bit more color vibrancy to the shadows so they don't feel too monotonous. For example, instead of using only green, try incorporating a desaturated purple into the shadows. Just make sure both colors remain within a similar value range. :) Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback