Hey there! Overall, it's looking really good! I ended up changing a few things because I got a little carried away while drawing, haha. But the main things I wanted to address were giving the nose a better shape, making it less boxy and a bit more organic, and slightly increasing the distance between the character's eyes, since they feel just a little too close together. As for the hair, it's looking nice! One thing I'd suggest is thinking about the overall shape of the hairstyle first, and then breaking it up into smaller, simpler forms. I like to think of them as ribbon-like shapes. Approaching hair this way makes it much easier to understand and maintain the volume of the hairstyle as a whole. P.S. I think I may have accidentally changed your character's look a little bit as well, lol. Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback