Hello :) Cool Jedi ! Yeah the pose is a bit flat-rigid indeed. If the light-sabers are ignited there is probably danger, so no straight back pose. You could use a martial artist picture as reference. Or draw from imagination. Artwod gives blog helps on that : - You have good shape - You have ok proportion - Try rotating the main axis of the body : neck, shoulders and the pelvic bone. preferably not parallel to each other. I'm not an expert myself, but it is what I try to do. Hope It helps.

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Silgil · 2026-07-31T15:10:19.686Z

I think the composition/pose is still too flat- rigid ??

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