Hey! Good work so far! :) I think the main thing to focus on is emphasizing the structure of the torso a bit more and making it feel more dynamic. If you look at most of their gesture drawings, you'll notice that the torso is clearly defined, with a strong emphasis on the oval shape of the rib cage and the shape of the pelvis. Those two forms help establish the overall flow and movement of the pose. As for the limbs, there isn't much to change. In most cases, they keep them very simple and only suggest the volume by using contour lines to describe the forms, which is very similar to what you've done here. Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback