This looks great! Overall you have a good sense of proportion. The detailing in the clothes and hair are looking believable. Well done. Some proportional mistakes around the arms. The elbow should be about halfway down the arm so the arm you drew on the right hand side (her left) is a little short. If you compare it to your own body the elbow comes down to just above the belly button and your fingertips are about halfway down way down your thigh. For the hand holding the sword, I would recommend using reference if you aren’t already doing so. As for what you should focus on, the answer is form and perspective. The two are basically the same thing, and understanding form will help you immensely. For example the hair is pretty good, but you’re trying to draw details a little too much. If you can imagine the hair as ribbons then you can draw it more confidently. Same goes for the clothes and really anything else you want to draw. | Artwod Feedback