Hey, Gino! I took a shot at refining your figure. I'm definitely not an expert when it comes to hatching, but I wanted to show you one possible way of approaching it. :) Try to make your hatching follow the direction of the forms. If possible, use slightly curved strokes instead of only straight ones, as they'll do a much better job of describing the volume and making the forms feel more three-dimensional. Hope this helps and keep it up, bud! :) | Artwod Feedback