Hey, Gino! Drawing larger body types can be tricky... but I gave the pose a bit of a correction! :) One thing you can work on is improving your line quality. I didn't do the best job demonstrating it here, my heavy hand wasn't cooperating today, haha. But try to emphasize your lines where forms overlap. Doing this helps create a stronger sense of volume. Another thing that can help is drawing contour lines to describe the form. This gives you a better understanding of the volume and allows you either to indicate the shape with lines that follow the direction of the mass, or to use that same wireframe as a guide when adding shading. Contour lines are always a useful tool for understanding the form of an object more clearly. Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback