Hey there! Overall, you did a great job! :) The main thing that feels a bit off is the proportions. The arm is a little too thin, and the shoulder pad could use a bit more thickness as well. The head is also slightly elongated, which causes the eyes to sit a bit too high and feel somewhat out of place. To be honest, I completely forgot what the original focus of your study was while I was doing the draw-over, haha. xD So I'd like to present these changes more as suggestions rather than definitive corrections. You could also spend some time studying the shapes of the hair, how it separates into different sections, instead of treating it as a single mass. Another area worth exploring is the use of hatching to describe volume, such as on the shoulder pad or along the arm to indicate the biceps and deltoid. Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback