Hey there! Good work here! I made a few adjustments to the lighting, as it didn't feel entirely consistent. Since the sun is placed behind Superman, the shadow side of his body should remain mostly in shadow, with only the portions of the silhouette facing the sun catching the light. This approach helps reinforce the presence of two distinct light sources: the primary one coming from the right side (I'm not entirely sure what it is, but it looks cool, lol), and the sun acting as a rim light to help define the silhouette. As for the hatching, I'm definitely not an expert on the subject, but one thing I'd recommend is making sure your strokes follow the direction of the forms. Try to avoid hatching against the flow of the surface, as that can diminish the sense of volume. When using crosshatching, I would also avoid making the secondary strokes perfectly perpendicular. For example, if your primary hatching is vertical, try using diagonal lines for the crosshatching instead. I'd highly recommend studying artists who specialize in this technique. Analyze their work closely and then apply those observations to your own illustrations. Hope this helps! :) | Artwod Feedback