Hey! From what I can see, you already have a solid foundation in gesture drawing. If I were to recommend one thing, it would be to focus on building more clearly defined torso forms. The best way to do that is to simplify the torso into an easy-to-read shape. Personally, I like to combine the bean shape with a pelvis box, that is, making the upper part a bit more rounded while keeping the lower part more squared off. This helps me establish the chest, abdomen, and pelvis more clearly later on. In the end, it’s also about finding the type of mannequin or construction method that works best for you when starting a figure drawing. One artist I really like, and who I think could help you better understand form and volume, is Diluc. You can find them on Instagram under that name. On top of that, adding a little more muscle indication would also help. :) Hope this helps! :) | Artwod Feedback