Hey! You've already received a great feedback, but I still wanted to share the version I made before you get the other feedback :p It's basically the same idea: separating your values more clearly to create stronger contrast, just as they explained. Notice that in both examples, we use the lighting to guide the viewer's eye toward the focal point. That's a really important concept to keep in mind. Try to use your lighting intentionally to direct the viewer's attention. Also, aim for strong value relationships around your focal point, such as light against dark or dark against light. Those kinds of contrasts make the focal area much easier to read and naturally draw the eye. Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback