Hey there! I'm not sure if you shared this a while ago, so if that's the case, sorry for the late feedback hehe. I really like the overall composition! The composition on the right page looks great, but I think the left page could use a bit more work. Since the characters are part of the composition and the narrative, I wouldn't place them right against the edge of the canvas. Instead, I'd move them closer to the thirds of the page. Shifting them slightly to the right makes them feel more integrated into the scene rather than pushed toward the edge. Also, be careful with the scale of the characters in relation to the houses. Right now, they're too large and have a similar size to the doors, or even a bit larger than the doors, which makes the scale feel a bit inconsistent. Once you adjust their size based on the doors, the scene immediately feels much more believable. :) Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback