Hello there! I don't have much to add; overall, the illustration looks great! There were only a couple of small adjustments I made. I felt that the woman's arm was slightly too wide, so I reduced it a bit and made a minor correction to the shape of the nose. The main thing I'd focus on, however, is the lighting. The background is currently very dark, which doesn't help the figures stand out, since you're creating a dark-on-dark contrast. Ideally, you want to aim for a dark-on-light contrast instead. Because of that, the first thing I did was brighten the red tones in the background. This immediately helps the silhouettes of both characters stand out much more clearly. You can also improve the sense of volume by pushing the lighting on both characters a bit further. Doing so will help prevent the painting from feeling flat and will give the figures a stronger three-dimensional presence. :) Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback