Hiii!! If anyone can help me w this I would be grateful! I was trying to do a sleepy/tired piece of my oc but it didn’t exactly turn out the way I wanted to I honestly don’t know what I can do to fix it so if anyone has any feedback it will be very appreciated!

Hiii!! If anyone can help me w this I would be grateful! I was trying to do a sleepy/tired piece of my oc but it didn’t exactly turn out the way I wanted to I honestly don’t know what I can do to fix it so if anyone has any feedback it will be very appreciated! | Artwod Feedback