Following some great feedback from Wallrus3D on my V1 and a few others elsewhere, I've tried to really apply thicker line-art use in the shading as well as hatching, alongside not conforming to the outline when detailing. I tried to keep the hook arms clean as I felt it helped them stand out more. I think this is the present absolute limit of my understanding after taking it to this point and would love to hear if it seems I've applied the aforementioned things right or wrong / what I could do better in keeping with the desired 70s/80s early DND aesthetic. I feel it's probably still too clean/smooth but I'm unsure of how to remedy that at this point.

Following some great feedback from Wallrus3D on my V1 and a few others elsewhere, I've tried to really apply thicker line-art use in the shading as well as hatching, alongside not conforming to the outline when detailing. I tried to keep the hook arms clean as I felt it helped them stand out more. I think this is the present absolute limit of my understanding after taking it to this point and would love to hear if it seems I've applied the aforementioned things right or wrong / what I could do better in keeping with the desired 70s/80s early DND aesthetic. I feel it's probably still too clean/smooth but I'm unsure of how to remedy that at this point. | Artwod Feedback