Hi, I tried my hand at taking a reference of the 5th Edition Dungeons and Dragons Hook Horror and trying to make it feel more 1st edition, that 1970s/1980s more simple inked sketch. I tried giving it a paper material layer and used a slightly rougher pen to ink it in after sketching. However, I feel it's still oddly clean, even a bit too bright/un-shaded and is missing something to capture that old-school DND inked illustrations vibe and would appreciate any feedback on that.

Hi, I tried my hand at taking a reference of the 5th Edition Dungeons and Dragons Hook Horror and trying to make it feel more 1st edition, that 1970s/1980s more simple inked sketch. I tried giving it a paper material layer and used a slightly rougher pen to ink it in after sketching. However, I feel it's still oddly clean, even a bit too bright/un-shaded and is missing something to capture that old-school DND inked illustrations vibe and would appreciate any feedback on that. | Artwod Feedback