The biggest things I would say are: - Look at the forms of the birds, the tops that are facing the sky should not be in blackness. (the worst case for this is the one on the right) - Consider adding in bounce light, this should not be as bright as your primary light source, but it should be bright enough to distinguish your objects from each other. Right now, a lot of the painting, while really cool, is being lost in blackness. Hope this helps and cant wait to see what you come up with great work so far it looks really cool! | Artwod Feedback